Travel on WIP Wednesday

We historical writers have history on our side when it comes to putting our heroes and heroines in close proximity for long periods. Our own ease of travel, with cars, trains, buses, and airplanes makes it a feat of the imagination to envision day-long trips to the shops, week long trips to house parties, and trips lasting months to places further afield.

This week, I’m looking for posts about journeys. Mine is from my story for the Bluestocking Belles’ 2017 Christmas box set. I’d love you to post yours in the comments.

Mrs Bletherow was castigating her poor companion again, oblivious to her audience.

Every group was different, and most groups had someone who was troublesome. Tad Berry could cheerfully handle the drunkards, the would-be Casanovas, the know-it-alls. But he hated bullies. His muscles burned with the effort it took to keep from rescuing the Bletherow hag’s drab shadow. Not his place. She was a free adult woman, and if she chose to stay with an employer who treated her so poorly, it was nothing to do with him.

His partner nudged him. “She don’t run out of steam, that one, eh?”

“Miss Thompson should tell her to go soak her head, Atame. Old crow.”

Tad and Atame had met them in Auckland two days ago, eight tourists seeking to view what Rotorua billed as the eighth wonder of the world. Tomorrow, they’d make their way to Te Wairoa, and the day after the locals would convey them to the Pink and White Terraces, dimpled with hot pools and cascading down the shores of a peaceful lake.

All through the boat trip to Tauranga and the coach journey to this Rotorua guest house, Mrs Bletherow had found fault with everything Miss Thompson did or failed to do. She had brought her employer the wrong book, failed to block out the sun, been too slow in the queue for food, put too much milk in Mrs Bletherow’s tea. Tad wouldn’t have blamed Miss Thompson for adding arsenic.

The withered wiry maid was as sour as her mistress, and attracted none of the old harridan’s contempt. She stood now at Mrs Bletherow’s elbow, nodding along with the woman’s complaints. “You knew we would be dining properly this evening. You deliberately packed the green gown in the large trunk. You must go and find it this instant, do you hear me?”

“Yes, Mrs Bletherow,” Miss Thompson said.

“See that you are quick. Parrish shall attend me in my room, and I want my gown by the time I am washed.” Mrs Bletherow sailed up the stairs, Parrish scurrying along in her wake.

Tad unfolded himself from the wall as Miss Thompson approached, her rather fine hazel eyes downcast. She began apologising while she was still several paces away. “I am very sorry for the inconvenience, Mr Berry, but I need to ask you to offload another of Mrs Bletherow’s trunks.”

“Of course, Miss Thompson. If you tell me which one, I shall bring it up to her room.”

She looked up at that, her brows drawing slightly together. “I am not sure, Mr Berry. I know which one it should be in, but Parrish finished the packing. May I come with you?”

He nodded, though the stables were no place for a lady. And Miss Thompson was a lady, and of better birth than Dame Bletherow, unless he missed his guess. Which, come to think of it, might be part of the reason for her illtreatment. Not that a bully needed a reason, beyond opportunity and a suitable victim.


2 thoughts on “Travel on WIP Wednesday

  1. I know it’s Thursday, but still… Mine’s from “The Novel Formerly Known as The Long Shadow” (I promise I’ll reveal the new title soon…!) In this scene, John wants to talk with his brother, but William makes himself mysteriously unavailable. So John resorts to subterfuge, sending William’s carriage away and forcing his brother to journey home with him. It’s not a literal journey, therefore, but the brothers do make a figurative journey while they travel. Here’s a part of it.


    John’s coachman had been walking the horses back and forth all evening. On John’s appearance, the footman jumped down, opened the door and pulled down the steps. William stared at the compartment as though it were a cart taking him to Tyburn, then grabbed the strap and pulled himself in. John took the opposite bench and the coachman whipped up the horses.

    It was raining, a thick, sleety mix hurled against the glass panes of the carriage by bursts of wind. The braziers were full of embers and John could feel their heat at his heels, but from the knees up he was frozen. Now that he had William in the carriage John became aware his head was aching. The words he had been rehearsing all evening abandoned him.

    The glass-fronted lamp swinging in the compartment threw strange shadows across William’s tense face. Anger quivered behind every word. ‘What, pray, have you done with my carriage?’

    ‘I told your coachman you were coming home with me.’

    ‘How prescient of you,’ William said. ‘You said yourself it will take twenty minutes to drive to Downing Street. Is that enough time for you to say your piece?’

    ‘I am no fool, Will. I’ve given my man instructions to drive us up and down until we are finished.’

    William gave John a disbelieving glare and looked out of the window. The fury and alarm on his face when he saw they were indeed travelling away from Downing Street gave John pause, but it was too late. William forced out between clenched teeth, ‘Well then, I have been well and truly kidnapped by my own brother.’

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