Yet another beginning on WIP Wednesday

I’ve made a start on the last Dragonblade novel for this year. The Night Dancers is due to the publisher on 31 August. Guess the inspiring folk tale!

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Melody Blackmore knew within minutes of entering the marquess’s study that the rumours were true. He was a terrible man. Had the investigation he wanted undertaken been the real reason she was here, she would have found some excuse and left again.

Although, from what he was saying, it was already too late. “You will move in immediately. You have one week to complete your investigation. At the end of that time, if you have not discovered my sons’ secret, my men will take you out, beat you, and hand you over to the navy press gang.”

This was a further escalation. Of the previous four investigators, the first had been dismissed, the second dismissed with a buffet or two from footmen, and third and fourth beaten each more heavily.

She would not give him the satisfaction of a reaction. “Two weeks. We shall write it into this contract.” She handed it to the bullying lord. “You will see that my daily charge is five guineas, plus expenses. Since you expect me to live in, you will be responsible for my keep for the fortnight. And, of course, we have yet to discuss my success fee.”

He stood and leaned on the desk, looming over her as she sat facing him. “You are not in a position to dictate terms, Mr. Black.”

“And yet you need my skills, Lord Teign,” Mel pointed out, maintaining her calm facade. “My success rate is second to none. And you have discarded so many investigators so violently that word has gone out in the fraternity. It is me, or no one.”

The argument got through to him. With a visible effort, he subdued his rage and sat down. “You are an arrogant young man,” he accused.

Mel had been lying about her identity since she first donned men’s clothes to undertake her first investigation. Without a blink, she accepted the accusation and replied, “My arrogance is justified. Within a fortnight, my lord, you shall have an answer. If we come to terms. Otherwise, I shall leave, shooting my way out if necessary.”

The last statement got his full attention. “Shooting? Damn it, man. I am a marquess. You’d not get out of here alive.”

“My reluctance to shoot you, my lord, is less than my reluctance to be beaten and pressed. And if you are dead, you shall not be able to deny whatever story I tell.”

Given the reception she was likely to get from the sailors when they discovered she was a woman, she would rather die trying to escape the marquess’s house, than die miserably in a ship’s hold after the sailors made a plaything of her.

If those were her choices, she’d be certain to send him down to hell before she breathed her last. But with two bad choices before her, she’d try for a third way.

“We do not, however, need to be at odds, my lord. You wish to find out how your sons are managing to remain fit and well without adequate food, and going through dancing slippers without any way of leaving their tower. I wish to survive this engagement and be paid for it, so I am highly motivated to discover their secret. That is my only interest, Lord Teign.”

“You are remarkably calm,” Lord Teign commented, frowning. He pulled the contract toward him and began to read it. Mel expressed her relief in a single long respiration. In. Out. Relax but remain alert. Remember your purpose.

Having made up his mind to accept her terms, Lord Teign spent little time reading the contract, and indeed, it was simple enough. He did not haggle over the two week term, the daily payment, the bonus for success, not any of the other terms, but simply read the contract through and signed both copies.

Within twenty minutes, her copy in her pocket, the butler was leading her to what he called “the young lords’ tower” through a maze of passages—servants’ passages, which might have been a deliberate affront.

The butler had searched her bag and her person, missing the false bottom in the bag and most of the weapons she had about her person. He had found the decoy gun she had in her pocket, but not the real one worn in a harness in the small of her back under her coat. Nor did he find the gunpowder and bullets in the heels of her boots.

On the whole, Mel was not dissatisfied. Nor was she discouraged by the butler’s pompous recitation, as she accompanied him through the house, about the impregnability of the tower—its thick walls, barred windows, and single door, which was both locked and guarded.

After all, ten spoilt lordlings could come and go as they pleased, evading the tower’s defences, their father’s servants, and the surveillance of four men who specialised in solving the problems of the haute ton, and uncovering their secrets. If they could do it, so could Mel.

All she had to do was discover their secret, and meanwhile carry out her real mission.

They turned a corner and began traversing a long hall with windows on both sides that looked out over roofs on one side and on the other, down into a stableyard. Two-thirds of the way to the other end, bars blocked their passage. Two sets of bars, in fact, each containing a gate.

The butler unlocked the first gate, then handed the key to one of the two footmen who had been escorting them through the house. The footman stayed outside and locked the gate. The same process saw Mel and the butler on their own at the end of the hall, with two locked gates behind them. Clever. The young lords would not be able to escape even if they overwhelmed whoever came into their chambers.

Mel’s respect for them went up a notch. Perhaps they were not so contemptible after all. It didn’t matter. They were not her main purpose her.

Next came a locked door, which let into an antechamber. The butler handed Mel his lamp and said, “Ring the bell and wait here for Lord Kemble,” He then shut her in. She heard the key turn in the lock.

Bell. There it was, a large handbell, on a table against the side wall of the chamber. There was another door opposite the one she’d entered by, and another table on the fourth wall of the room. And that was all. Just bare stone walls and a wooden floor, a plain ceiling, the two tables, the two doors, and the bell.

Very well, then. Time to meet the sons of the Marquess of Teigh. Mel put down her bag on the floor and the lamp on the table. What would they say when she told them why she was there? Not the whole of it, of course. Just their part of it. There was one sure way to find out. She picked up the bell and rang it.

 

2 thoughts on “Yet another beginning on WIP Wednesday

  1. I like her pluck and courage! Since there are 10 young Lords, I assume her love interest will be the overberaring Marquis. What an intriguing and merry tale this will be!!!

    • It will be the eldest son, Allan, Earl of Kemble, the leader of the brothers and the one who has come up with a unique way of earning money so they can escape their tyrannical and cruel father.

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